Tuesday, September 4, 2012

The Dead Star of Mine

Jen

You are so meaningful to me
You shared beautiful memories
with that blooming eyes
Calming face and beautiful smiles
Your corny jokes that makes me laugh
Every time that I’m with you
i feel so lucky
you are the who comforts me
When I’m alone and lonely
thats the reason why I’m in love with you
many years passed and still you’re in my memory
miles is in between us
and i though that there’s no problem
when we are parted
i wish someday will see again
and we will continue
the love we’ve begin
i miss you so much
i wish i could see you now
and show me again your beautiful smiles
give your corny jokes
and laugh with me again
i know we promised that we never give up
but as of now i realize that there’s no fortune for us
all the memories is still in mine
but my love for you is turned into dust
and now finally decided
that i shall now consider you as the Dead Star of mine
I miss you...


Ian

2 comments:

  1. nagapgaden... hahaha..
    i wish i can see that dead star of yours someday who made your heart broken..

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  2. Good job! You presented your answer through a poem :)
    You may also add at the last part the lesson you learned from this experience.

    A-

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